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A lot of emotions there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 20, 2009 at 5:30 PM
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Beautiful and whistful
The soft and elegant yearning of this poem is phenomenally well presented - this poem is so effective I had to read it twice just because I enjoyed it so much
posted by
lionreign
on June 19, 2009 at 8:04 AM
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Wonderful expressions and use of words, "as gentle as the night wind and as quick as a moonbow"---your poems are truly exquisite. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on June 19, 2009 at 6:26 AM
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Such bitter sweet imagery Sinome!
Beautifully written indeed; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on June 19, 2009 at 3:44 AM
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Beautifully written!
posted by
Chilitree
on June 19, 2009 at 3:25 AM
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Brava! Brava!
you are my thunder and now your shadow touches me... dear one, blessed penny poet!... you've moved the depth of my being again... how we all miss the love that is so close... and simply wants to be with us... thank you
xoxoxo
posted by
MasonGarrett
on June 19, 2009 at 12:07 AM
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Wow! so very creative - enchanting write. Bravo- your imagination sparkles and entrances the readerleaving us in your shadow.
posted by
merkie
on June 18, 2009 at 10:14 PM
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Wow! A shadow, indeed! What visual imagery and the elusiveness of it as well! Splendid! sammie loves you, too!
posted by
sam444
on June 18, 2009 at 9:31 PM
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Beautiful and haunting, such a masterpiece!
posted by
calia14
on June 18, 2009 at 9:18 PM
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Such love. wonderful right.
posted by
texture
on June 18, 2009 at 9:00 PM
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