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Most stirring write Marta! Thunder of applause!!
posted by
merkie
on June 18, 2009 at 10:16 PM
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I am lost right here.
posted by
Star5_
on June 18, 2009 at 6:11 PM
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Excellent as always.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 18, 2009 at 4:59 PM
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Brava! Brava!
I throw roses to your stage! ...thunder! ...yes, in your writing... as a metaphor, whether you relaize it or not... is the inspiration... the transits... the creative shock... thunder lighting... and it just comes raining out of one... in a flood of creative energy... you words are often thunder to me... and I fly into a marvelous abyiss of emotions... thank you... xoxoxo
posted by
MasonGarrett
on June 18, 2009 at 3:29 PM
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Plenty of that here last night! Nice one, Sinome!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on June 18, 2009 at 10:42 AM
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Sinome
Wow – what a powerful pull thunder has on you (or at least in your usual manner you’ve written about it so fervently). For me, thunder is not so much foreboding or thought-provoking as it as a reminder of how I am safe and tucked away amidst the blessings of home.
posted by
Troosha
on June 18, 2009 at 10:39 AM
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So very vivid
you paint this scene with utter clarity, so that I almost fear and dream along with you
posted by
lionreign
on June 18, 2009 at 7:43 AM
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What a vivid picture, and how well you bring out the atmosphere! Blessings. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on June 18, 2009 at 6:57 AM
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Strong sense-driven poem! Beautiful writing!
posted by
Ariala
on June 18, 2009 at 4:50 AM
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Sinome
excellent imagery - isn't it amazing on occasion how the pen can run away all by itself! Many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on June 18, 2009 at 4:21 AM
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Very well expressed! Beautiful poem.
posted by
Chilitree
on June 17, 2009 at 11:59 PM
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Nothing more haunting than this Sinome. I share the sentiments too..so well written.
posted by
shobana
on June 17, 2009 at 9:35 PM
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