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Pray tell; I would not want to awaken, either! This is fantastic imagery! The blend of nature and poignant feelings is so very vivid! I get so far behind on my reading at times and I miss wonderful poetry that would give me such a lift! I love you 2nd mostest after 1st mostest! lol sammie
posted by
sam444
on June 17, 2009 at 12:19 PM
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Incredible
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 16, 2009 at 2:32 PM
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hautingly beautiful, Sinome...the imagery is so vivid I can picture
the entire scene as if real..
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posted by
Rumor
on June 16, 2009 at 2:12 PM
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Great! Yes, emotions do have colors and tastes and smells that all lend to the feelings.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 16, 2009 at 10:18 AM
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I know that feeling
posted by
Lanetay
on June 16, 2009 at 9:33 AM
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So poignantly sad..
...so quietly beautiful....
posted by
Raphael222
on June 16, 2009 at 8:37 AM
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truly inspired
and inspiring... I know the feeling of having a poem flow from heart to paper (or screen) as if I have taken dictation from another, it is often those that fill the screen with the most vivid emotion...although I have yet to read any nondescript sadness in your poems
posted by
lionreign
on June 16, 2009 at 7:24 AM
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Sinome
There's always so much longing in your poems...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 16, 2009 at 6:18 AM
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Another beauty Sinome
such powerful dreams seem almost lucid and touch us with sadness on awakening; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on June 16, 2009 at 5:26 AM
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You've touched on a universal note in your poem. Who wants to wake up after a dream like that?
posted by
elinjo
on June 16, 2009 at 1:28 AM
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You truly weave magic with your words....sometimes I'm at a loss to express how beautiful, poignant and powerful your poems are! Thanks very much for your warm comment and prayerful support. Blessings! Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on June 16, 2009 at 12:34 AM
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Sinome
Sometimes you just don't want to wake up from those dreams..beautiful poem. Thanks so much for your comments earlier.
posted by
shobana
on June 15, 2009 at 10:32 PM
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when I see good dreams and wake up....I close my eyes twice as tight to
dream again....
posted by
Star5_
on June 15, 2009 at 9:18 PM
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Beautifully powerful Sinome...
Sometimes I feel like this.
posted by
yellowrose55
on June 15, 2009 at 9:15 PM
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