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So wonderfully written Sinome - the emotions evoked just so real.
posted by
shobana
on June 15, 2009 at 10:35 PM
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if I could reach the keyboard, I would stand while I write this...
because that's as close as I can get to an ovation - Bravo!! The exquisite sadness, buoyed by the flavour of hope and peace in this marvel is overwhelming. The clarity of emotion in this is simpley stunning
posted by
lionreign
on June 15, 2009 at 10:14 AM
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How glorious to have the pain gone! I look for that day myself! I was moved by the imagery! So sorry it has taken so long to catch up to you! The work never ends and I never stop! lol Love you mucho! sammie
xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on June 14, 2009 at 5:08 PM
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"I retreat to my inconsequence"..a very poignant, poerful line, Sinome
But I like the upbeat ending...rain truly does wash away the past (on more than one level)...and wipes the slate of life and dreams clean..
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posted by
Rumor
on June 14, 2009 at 2:49 PM
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Marta you rock and move me with empathic emotions! Cool rain that mists the searcher in truth!
posted by
merkie
on June 14, 2009 at 10:05 AM
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The ending is particularly beautiful!
posted by
Nita09
on June 14, 2009 at 9:49 AM
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hmmmmmmm
such a beauty....
posted by
Star5_
on June 13, 2009 at 8:23 PM
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hmmmmmmm
such a beauty....
posted by
Star5_
on June 13, 2009 at 8:23 PM
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No need of
. Feel the rain
posted by
Azur
on June 13, 2009 at 6:02 PM
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I liked this a lot.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 13, 2009 at 5:23 PM
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This is beautiful. Absent eyes are everywhere, but so is love.
posted by
texture
on June 13, 2009 at 4:34 PM
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