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This is lovely.
posted by
hardilaziz
on June 16, 2009 at 5:58 AM
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The quest for knowledge and love in our own niches shines in the warmth of your words. BCA, BillJRoost
posted by
BC-A
on June 13, 2009 at 10:12 AM
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What a beautiful and powerful picture! Thank you ever so much for your warm and comforting response to my post--am truly grateful for caring friends like you. Please do keep Ashish in your prayers. Many thanks again and blessings. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on June 13, 2009 at 7:27 AM
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I love the close with invading her heart! So powerful! Wonderful imagery throughout, sweetie! How are you? I have been so busy with this house I can hardly move! I haven't been this tired in ages! Love you!!! sammie
posted by
sam444
on June 12, 2009 at 3:45 PM
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Sinome
Always so beautiful luv, and I too am waiting:....."
she wished Heaven would have cried its magic tears " and Monday heaven had better cry its magic tears luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 12, 2009 at 3:31 PM
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BEAUTIFUL VISIONS OF A BUTTERFLY
posted by
Lanetay
on June 12, 2009 at 10:31 AM
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Perhaps heaven only weeps
for those butterflies who have nothing to learn from the flame and allows the dance to go unhindered for those butterflies destined to become stars.
posted by
lionreign
on June 12, 2009 at 8:10 AM
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Sinome
Keep dancing around the fire – even when it seems so very difficult.
posted by
Troosha
on June 12, 2009 at 7:31 AM
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I'm on the edge of my seat..so grasping and wanting love's embrace. A very deep dance. Beautiful Sinome.
posted by
yellowrose55
on June 11, 2009 at 10:23 PM
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out loud it is wonderful, too. :)
posted by
texture
on June 11, 2009 at 7:06 PM
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Sinome
This reminds me of another song (TAPS' post reminded me of one as well, lol). In this case, it's Dolly Parton singing, 'Love is like a butterfly, as soft and gentle as a sigh...'
posted by
Nautikos
on June 11, 2009 at 6:45 PM
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Sinome
Spellbinding........and heart-wrenching.....his name was Jim.
posted by
Krisles
on June 11, 2009 at 6:00 PM
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Just amazing.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 11, 2009 at 5:15 PM
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This touched my soul, Marta. Using the butterfly and then the girl, only made the girl seem more fragile, more delicate - just like the butterfly. It brushed across my heart in tendrils of pain, and I felt for the girl as much as I felt for the butterfly...
posted by
NiteTide
on June 11, 2009 at 4:53 PM
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Sinome, interesting comparisone and contrasts between the butterfly and the
fire and the young girl and the fire....well done!...this is worth a few reads to take and drink it all in...
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posted by
Rumor
on June 11, 2009 at 2:49 PM
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