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Re: Elegantly done... the honesty of this poem is breath taking
this poem had some mystery, truth, imagination, or nothing at all.......sometime after a long day at work, when I get home I need to write some to hold me together....or somedays when I wake up so much peace and harmony I need to share about it......
please know that somedays I am the twin.......the typical gemini......I myself don't know the next moment what it is in my mind.....the reason is nothing really I have to hold on....so simply Ilive with the moments of thoughts........
so sometimes I am with energized spirit of Nickel back or other times in a cool relaxing mood of seether tune..............that's all the best I can have for a day at times.....that's simple and so easy moments......
posted by
Star5_
on June 11, 2009 at 7:13 AM
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Elegantly done... the honesty of this poem is breath taking
posted by
lionreign
on June 11, 2009 at 6:11 AM
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Mystereo and shobana, truthfully I don't know what was in my mind, but
subconsciously I was right there........isn't my mind a different stanza......
posted by
Star5_
on June 10, 2009 at 8:22 PM
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Great read loved the way you expressed yourself, such a processive poem.
posted by
Mystereo
on June 10, 2009 at 8:00 PM
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YES 9star
The way you went with that poem, If whoever it is don't love you enough - he has got a thing or two coming his way!!
posted by
shobana
on June 9, 2009 at 9:54 PM
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Do you ever love me?????????
posted by
Star5_
on June 9, 2009 at 7:39 PM
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