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Covering all the senses.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 11, 2009 at 5:15 PM
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You really know how to paint a picture with your words.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 11, 2009 at 12:38 PM
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I saw Nights in Rodente yesterday in which Richard Gere pulls Diane Lane away from a falling cabinet during a storm. Today I really enjoy the sounds of the night that both cool and chill in your poem. BCA, BillJRoost
posted by
BC-A
on June 11, 2009 at 10:28 AM
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Sinome
You described the bed and the shower so beautifully I felt my eyes closing. But, if I went to bed it won't be humid because it's chilly here, so much so that I put the furnace on in the mornings. Where is Al Gore's Global warming I wonder?
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 10, 2009 at 8:42 PM
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Sinome
An awesome poem. Yes change does come from within first. Loved it.
posted by
shobana
on June 10, 2009 at 7:31 PM
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beautiful picture of a storm, Sinome, along with the underlying message
that makes this one a treat..
.....
posted by
Rumor
on June 10, 2009 at 11:19 AM
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Sinome
Speechless………… 
posted by
Troosha
on June 10, 2009 at 9:59 AM
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So skillfully crafted is this contemplation of life, both ordinary and extraordinary in its scope. Well done!
posted by
calia14
on June 10, 2009 at 8:22 AM
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The TV does drag us back to the grimmer side of reality doesn't it?
but there is always more to see, more to do and more to learn
posted by
lionreign
on June 10, 2009 at 7:47 AM
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There always seems to be more to seek and more to find! Outstanding imagery, too! sammie
posted by
sam444
on June 10, 2009 at 5:54 AM
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this is different, and its that hot
posted by
Lanetay
on June 9, 2009 at 9:40 PM
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Your words so wonderfully paint an intimate picture..thundering luminous nature intertwined with such sad contemplation.
posted by
yellowrose55
on June 9, 2009 at 9:37 PM
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Listen to the inner voice- that's what I want to do after reading your poem!
posted by
hardilaziz
on June 9, 2009 at 8:46 PM
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posted by
Azur
on June 9, 2009 at 8:33 PM
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Very mood Sinome
posted by
Azur
on June 9, 2009 at 8:33 PM
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