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Post Aah my parents vacationed to visit my mother’s sister and nieces in Miami the year before I was born. Although they visited in the summer I was born in the autumn of the following year so the trip only inspired my conception love. BCA, BillJRoost
posted by
BC-A
on June 9, 2009 at 2:33 PM
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Superb poem
the imagery is delicate and yet passionately intense - totally engrossing and yet never tacky. Good message in there too - I like this very much
posted by
lionreign
on June 9, 2009 at 8:34 AM
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Steamy imagery with a powerful message! sammie
xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on June 8, 2009 at 10:14 PM
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you are so passionate
posted by
Lanetay
on June 8, 2009 at 9:34 PM
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What a passionate piece you have created here!!
posted by
calia14
on June 8, 2009 at 8:57 PM
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Very eloquent.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 8, 2009 at 8:37 PM
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Woo, I got a little hot under the collar there! This was gorgeously done - as all your work is, Marta! And true, life is a simple fact as much as love is. We are the ones that seem to complicate it!
posted by
NiteTide
on June 8, 2009 at 6:14 PM
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