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Flowing vibrantly and busy, life can become crazy blur. Nice one Calia.

posted by yellowrose55 on June 11, 2009 at 10:59 PM | link to this | reply

Sounds exactly like life sometimes.  Things are moving around so fast we don't even have time to process it!

posted by NiteTide on June 11, 2009 at 4:45 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful snap shot of the power of movement. The brevity of words becomes what it is, and I can feel the wind rustling under my feathers.

posted by jfm32 on June 9, 2009 at 6:03 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent Calia... :-)

posted by Sinome on June 7, 2009 at 1:34 PM | link to this | reply

I know that feeling.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 7, 2009 at 12:50 PM | link to this | reply

Calia
Yup – sometimes we just have to stop and breathe and breathe and breathe again…

posted by Troosha on June 7, 2009 at 9:48 AM | link to this | reply

It can be grabbing such as this poem! sam

posted by sam444 on June 7, 2009 at 8:44 AM | link to this | reply

... heady stuff!

posted by hardilaziz on June 7, 2009 at 7:24 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful!

posted by Kayzzaman on June 7, 2009 at 4:44 AM | link to this | reply

Windy indeed...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on June 6, 2009 at 11:19 PM | link to this | reply