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                This is so representative of my daughter's relationship! If I could get her to understand your close her life would be so much better! Very poignant, indeed! sam 
 
  
                
                    posted by
                    sam444
                     on June 6, 2009 at 7:11 AM
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                Strong emotions make for intense poems!  Great job on this one, it has a real, raw feel to it that makes it very easy to relate to.  
                
                    posted by
                    calia14
                     on June 5, 2009 at 9:29 PM
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                    sad.....
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    Star5_
                     on June 5, 2009 at 7:53 PM
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