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Re: NiteTide
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on June 10, 2009 at 8:01 AM
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Wow. I'm wordless. I'm speechless. Again. Damn, you make me lose my train of thought quite quickly with your terrific verse. Each line is just image-perfect, lion. I can imagine the moment the eyes open, to when they land on the person next to him, to the soft skin under the rising sun - tinted two colors by the shadow that still lurks...damn. You're good.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 8, 2009 at 6:43 PM
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Re: Lion
Thanks Troosha! I worry sometimes that I am getting stale or repetitive, so this comment is truly encouraging
posted by
lionreign
on June 8, 2009 at 7:00 AM
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Re: Sinome
Thank you, dear lady, I am delighted that it effected you so
posted by
lionreign
on June 8, 2009 at 6:57 AM
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Re: Can I steal your words,........it's flowing like river with a charming tune
Thank you, Sue! I am so glad you like what I write
posted by
lionreign
on June 8, 2009 at 6:55 AM
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Re: drohan254
Welcome back! And thank you so much
posted by
lionreign
on June 8, 2009 at 6:49 AM
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Re: Sam444
Thanks Sam, glad you liked this one
posted by
lionreign
on June 8, 2009 at 6:46 AM
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Lion
With each love poem, I think you’re getting better and better. You words spill like honey…soft and deliberate.
posted by
Troosha
on June 7, 2009 at 10:03 AM
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Wow... you made me remember waking up at dawn wishing the night did not have to end... . Beautifully writen :-)
posted by
Sinome
on June 6, 2009 at 12:29 AM
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Can I steal your words,........it's flowing like river with a charming tune
posted by
Star5_
on June 5, 2009 at 7:06 PM
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wonderful poem ended very sweetly ..loved the ending ...
posted by
drohan254
on June 5, 2009 at 5:28 PM
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Outstanding imagery leading to a wonderful close! I love the entire poem! I thought the cadence was excellent, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 5, 2009 at 3:21 PM
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