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Re: NiteTide
I would swap in a heart beat
posted by
lionreign
on June 10, 2009 at 8:02 AM
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Pfft! The sun sucks! It's friggin' HOT over here. Give me the rain over there! I MUCH prefer that! LOL.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 8, 2009 at 6:37 PM
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Re: rockingrector
Thank you so much!
posted by
lionreign
on June 5, 2009 at 10:41 AM
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Re: BC-A
Wow, thank you so much
posted by
lionreign
on June 5, 2009 at 10:25 AM
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Re: sam444
Thank you! I'm glad you liked this somewhat whimsical offering
posted by
lionreign
on June 5, 2009 at 10:23 AM
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Re: you made me think I am beautiful, because I am naturally tan
Sue, my friend, I have read your work and I can conclusively state that you are beautiful
posted by
lionreign
on June 5, 2009 at 10:14 AM
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Re: This is the frist I every read on a TAN you wrote it well deep and awsome!
Thanks Mystereo... sometimes inspiration comes from the strangest places
posted by
lionreign
on June 5, 2009 at 10:13 AM
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Re: Merkie
hehe I like that freckles comment I will remember that :D HEre was warm and dry... now it threatens rain, but the tan still remains... as does the smile
posted by
lionreign
on June 5, 2009 at 10:12 AM
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Re: Lion
Thanks Troosha - I have stripey feet, which I look at with vast amusment. I mostly tan by accident, but I do it very well
posted by
lionreign
on June 5, 2009 at 10:08 AM
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Re: Sinome
I believe that one has to be genetically predisposed to be particularly susceptable to the big C and so I choose not to worry, but I look at blemishes like I look at wrinkles - trophies of the best of times or marks of hard lessons learn, all worn with pride and a big big smile
posted by
lionreign
on June 5, 2009 at 10:02 AM
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Beautiful, beautiful summer!
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on June 5, 2009 at 8:45 AM
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TALES TO
THRILL
Oh the good life and it’s your poem that’s good. BCA, BillJRoost
posted by
BC-A
on June 5, 2009 at 7:37 AM
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I love the last line! What an awesome way to look at it! And, as always, your word choice is so exquisite! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 4, 2009 at 11:30 PM
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you made me think I am beautiful, because I am naturally tan
and my sisters are more fair skin....
posted by
Star5_
on June 4, 2009 at 9:27 PM
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This is the frist I every read on a TAN you wrote it well deep and awsome!
posted by
Mystereo
on June 4, 2009 at 3:46 PM
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Gorgeous tan you have Lion! Upbeat attitude is contagious! Summer will soon be upon us! It is hot and dry here and keeping the plants watered is a daily chore . Freckles are where the sun kisses you!
posted by
merkie
on June 4, 2009 at 11:32 AM
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Lion
Ahh, yes, tanning beneath the summer sun. And you describe it so well (white line inclusive). I have only of few of those....
posted by
Troosha
on June 4, 2009 at 10:53 AM
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Wonderful poem Lion... Its funny but I look at my freckles sometimes (and yes
, also at those awful little round brounish marks that are here and there ...) and as you I imagine they are badges of honor loll...that each represents a laugh or a good time I spent under that sun that back then I thought to be life giving and only later found out was slowly cooking me
. I see some people my age... that are totally white... no freckles, no spots or specks, and I got to feel sorry in a way for them... Did they spend their youth under an umbrella???? I guess they look at me and say "Wow she is for sure going to get the big C" But hey... we got to go of something and at least those good times I am taking with me :-) Great poem !
posted by
Sinome
on June 4, 2009 at 10:27 AM
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