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Re: NiteTide
nope - I could be anything in human form... I'm not even sure what it is to be human, glad you liked this one though, it's a bit of good fun
posted by
lionreign
on June 10, 2009 at 8:04 AM
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This line:
The cheeky morning
Laps softly at my smile, <-- is a phrase I enjoyed like no other. I haven't liked a line this much in a LONG time. You always have such a way with words, it's amazing. Are you sure you're human?
posted by
NiteTide
on June 8, 2009 at 6:34 PM
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Re: Something about others that make the heart spring in a form or school
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on June 5, 2009 at 3:40 AM
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Something about others that make the heart spring in a form or school
boy or girl, some kind silly passion. Deep.
posted by
Mystereo
on June 4, 2009 at 3:49 PM
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Re: This is such a beauty my dear Lion
Thank you, dear one
posted by
lionreign
on June 4, 2009 at 8:54 AM
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Re: A beautiful way to start the day
that sounds heavenly
posted by
lionreign
on June 4, 2009 at 8:53 AM
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Re: rockingrector
Thanks - it really does make the day more lively if you start it right
posted by
lionreign
on June 4, 2009 at 8:42 AM
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Re: Yellowrose55
Thank you - glad you had fun with it
posted by
lionreign
on June 4, 2009 at 8:40 AM
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Re: Sam444
Thanks sam - I was feeling very cheerful when I wrote this and pictured a morning of bright smiles and mischief
posted by
lionreign
on June 4, 2009 at 8:36 AM
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Re: Beautiful!
Thank you, dear friend
posted by
lionreign
on June 4, 2009 at 8:34 AM
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Re: chuck_ibrahim
Thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on June 4, 2009 at 8:31 AM
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Re: Merkie
Thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on June 4, 2009 at 8:21 AM
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This is such a beauty my dear Lion
Sunny and bright and wonderful start to the day! Many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on June 4, 2009 at 3:52 AM
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A beautiful way to start the day
Familiar feelings of a soft warm sweater one can slip into and remember dreamy times.
posted by
skye08
on June 4, 2009 at 3:27 AM
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This is bright and happy - perfect way to start a new day.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on June 4, 2009 at 1:20 AM
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Joy brings out beauty like your poem makes me wanna dance.
Nice one...
posted by
yellowrose55
on June 3, 2009 at 11:08 PM
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I adored a 'cheeky morning'; I liked to think of it as a bit sassy in a bold way! Love the second half of the poem for it accentuated the first half! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 3, 2009 at 9:14 PM
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Beautiful!
posted by
Star5_
on June 3, 2009 at 8:11 PM
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Beautiful imagery
Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on June 3, 2009 at 8:07 PM
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Bright cheery cheeky verse greets a day so gleefully! Excellent Lion!
posted by
merkie
on June 3, 2009 at 9:30 AM
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