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Wonderful words --both poems are simply great.

posted by michaudblaine on June 8, 2009 at 9:22 PM | link to this | reply

like Chili, that particular line jumped out at me, merkie..."good bye"
has to be the saddest word in the English language....

posted by Rumor on June 8, 2009 at 3:29 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful poem Merkie....

Wishing for the diamond days

Turning all my songs to praise.

 

Full of wistful love...realities, imprenated with loving memories.....especially the rug.

Raphael

posted by Raphael222 on June 6, 2009 at 9:35 PM | link to this | reply

Goodbyes are sorrow's feathers ... I love this line!

posted by Chilitree on June 5, 2009 at 10:59 PM | link to this | reply

A journey down memory lane........some joyous, some wistful memories give momentum to these lovely poems.

posted by shamasehar on June 5, 2009 at 6:18 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful poems
although both seem a little sad today

posted by lionreign on June 4, 2009 at 8:30 AM | link to this | reply

A beautiful sharing my friend
both superb; memories wistful happy and sad - sometimes that's all we have left; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on June 4, 2009 at 3:50 AM | link to this | reply

Great memories of childhood.

posted by Rockingrector_retd on June 4, 2009 at 1:36 AM | link to this | reply

Memories of childhood friends do haunt the heart sometimes....your words flow with deep feeling Merkie.

posted by yellowrose55 on June 3, 2009 at 10:19 PM | link to this | reply

(S)well done Margaret! I love memories that are joyous! Wonderful imagery, too! sam/Shelly  

posted by sam444 on June 3, 2009 at 9:09 PM | link to this | reply

Both of them are beautiful Thanks for sharing.

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on June 3, 2009 at 8:05 PM | link to this | reply

A lovely poetry merkie, so heartfelt

posted by shobana on June 3, 2009 at 7:27 PM | link to this | reply

merkie
When you're "Thinking Some" of more lovely poetry to write, have a happy day doing that luv.

posted by WileyJohn on June 3, 2009 at 9:10 AM | link to this | reply

Your memories beautifully reflect a nice time and place in your childhood love. BCA, Bill’s Roost

 

posted by BC-A on June 3, 2009 at 8:33 AM | link to this | reply