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Marta - this truly does haunt, and I think this would haunt everyone's own soul because we are all afraid of the words that want to come out, the feelings that want to emerge - too personal to reveal - a danger in making us vulnerable....It's always a balancing war with poetry and the soul.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 8, 2009 at 6:03 PM
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sinome
posted by
Star5_
on June 5, 2009 at 7:09 AM
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That's fantastic, Sinome.
Definitely something to think about.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 4, 2009 at 5:06 AM
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The poem in your head gets down sooner or later love. BCA, Bill’s Roost
posted by
BC-A
on June 3, 2009 at 10:22 AM
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beautiful and haunting
posted by
skye08
on June 2, 2009 at 3:06 PM
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About all of us.
posted by
texture
on June 2, 2009 at 2:59 PM
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But will you ever be free if you don't allow your poem to air itself?
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on June 2, 2009 at 12:35 PM
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Sinome
posted by
Nautikos
on June 2, 2009 at 11:08 AM
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so tragic, melancholic
and gently beautiful, your sad poems have a knack of triggering my hug reflex
posted by
lionreign
on June 2, 2009 at 8:01 AM
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A haunting beauty Sinome
and the poem was born regardless! Excellent imagery; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on June 2, 2009 at 4:35 AM
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Haunting indeed!
posted by
hardilaziz
on June 1, 2009 at 8:27 PM
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Boy do I know that feeling.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 1, 2009 at 8:22 PM
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Sinome
Something in the caverns - secret, struggling to come out but the mouth cannot speak. Spoken, no longer your's, unspoken, the heart cringes; this dilemma is so well portrayed by Marta, the princess of the ocean kissed sands. xoxoxoxo
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on June 1, 2009 at 8:14 PM
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Beautiful Sinome bittersweet sentiment echoes into verse.
posted by
merkie
on June 1, 2009 at 8:00 PM
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BRAVO all the day long! Such exquisite imagery! I am finally moved in! So exhausted! But come see me, you will be able to sit down in the living room! lol My new dining room rugs arrive Wednesday! I can't wait! Love you! sammie
posted by
sam444
on June 1, 2009 at 7:43 PM
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Sinome
Beautiful and I think you should write it out if even for yourself and set part of you free.
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 1, 2009 at 7:26 PM
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The feeling in this is immense and bursting to come out. It's beautiful...
posted by
yellowrose55
on June 1, 2009 at 7:05 PM
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