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Nice one..you put me there, by the sea where I love to be.
posted by
yellowrose55
on August 8, 2009 at 10:19 AM
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I love this...and can really feel it. Plus I am currently reading a book which takes place mostly by the ocean!
posted by
RASSE
on June 24, 2009 at 1:25 PM
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Very nice, I can smell the salt from here...
posted by
calia14
on June 18, 2009 at 9:35 PM
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Too occasional
say I
posted by
Azur
on June 14, 2009 at 7:00 PM
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Naut, lovely. I love how you overlapped the words.
I always told you that you have the heart of a poet . You also are very much a romantic. It is time, in my humble opinion, that you combine the two. muser
posted by
muser
on June 8, 2009 at 7:13 AM
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uh!!! I just thought of this loll... I should have commented with it :-) Got to show you :-)
Excellentmyfriend
youareverytalented
Iloveallyourstuff
( sorry about that, could not help it, loll) be well
posted by
Sinome
on June 7, 2009 at 8:23 PM
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Excellent and unique... Love it
posted by
Sinome
on June 7, 2009 at 8:18 PM
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WOW ~ Really Nice!!
posted by
BrightIrish
on June 5, 2009 at 7:26 PM
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NAUTIKOS
I love this! I also write in this form.....quite a bit, actually....in some private emails and maybe in a blog or two here....I call it "rapping" becausethat'sexactlywhatitfeelslikeandonceyougetintoityoucanactuallygetarhythmgoing....
posted by
Krisles
on June 4, 2009 at 2:50 PM
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yesandit'scallingtome
Wow! It's hard to leave out the spaces. They just automatically want to place themselves between words.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 31, 2009 at 8:01 PM
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I wish I would have thought of Azur's comment presentation! I love it, too! It is a little e e cummings' feel for me! KUDOS!!!! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on May 31, 2009 at 6:15 PM
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Naut
Ilovethisandhowthe
wordsruntogether
posted by
Azur
on May 31, 2009 at 5:17 PM
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~the ocean calls
posted by
Blue_feathers
on May 31, 2009 at 4:55 PM
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Naut’s mind is a remarkable thing….
posted by
Troosha
on May 31, 2009 at 8:11 AM
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Troosh
Thanks. And yes, the blending of the words was intentional...
posted by
Nautikos
on May 31, 2009 at 8:03 AM
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Naut
Did you mean for each word to blend together? Just curious. Given I live out here by the ocean this created a crisp and visible image for me….
posted by
Troosha
on May 31, 2009 at 7:26 AM
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