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The joy....the pain...it's amazing how much the earth doesn't change when we / our hearts have changed so significantly. We think the world will change with our hearts...and yet we see that it is only us...and even if it comes to an end...the earth remains constant...and in a way it helps us to recover from the pain of changing.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 8, 2009 at 5:44 PM
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Marta, I can't add anything that will better describe....
your poem than what has been written. So, I'll just say 2
!
posted by
Texas_Gem
on May 28, 2009 at 5:47 PM
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Love can certainly brighten a day.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 28, 2009 at 4:05 PM
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Sinome
I read this earlier but return to comment now. It is lovely. The luminance of love
posted by
Azur
on May 28, 2009 at 11:22 AM
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wow
such tender insight - this is so true and so beautifully expressed. I would tell you which bit is my favourite but I'd have to post the whole poem
posted by
lionreign
on May 28, 2009 at 10:01 AM
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I like not if but when it comes
posted by
Lanetay
on May 28, 2009 at 9:23 AM
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I have really missed your beautiful poems
The world is a more rosy place.
posted by
skye08
on May 28, 2009 at 5:16 AM
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Perfect description Sinome............
this is exactly how it is! You have captured this feeling beautifully; very well done; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on May 28, 2009 at 4:58 AM
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Beautiful and so true...you have an amazing insight into the human mind and emotions. Thanks for commenting on my post. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on May 28, 2009 at 3:44 AM
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Oooops! Look what I did to your name.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 28, 2009 at 2:26 AM
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Wonderful, Simone. I remember how it was--all these years since first love came to me in 1957. One doesn't forget something like that--not the littlest detail.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 28, 2009 at 2:25 AM
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Ps . my new book is out go to amazon.com and put in osiris halisi I sent it
out to you today! check out cover! poetry!
posted by
lestate7
on May 28, 2009 at 2:11 AM
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Awesome,awesome! love you!
posted by
lestate7
on May 28, 2009 at 2:07 AM
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When you fall in love, the stars will dance, the rain will tickle your
heart, Sun will flash in mind even when it's dark.....mind will get ready for another kiss.......and don't you, won't you agree......
always Sue
posted by
Star5_
on May 27, 2009 at 8:51 PM
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Sinome
Beautiful, "When you fall in love,
not if but when ...
nothing will really change, ....."
and I love that not if but when, and the rest of that poem is as gentle as the rain....
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 27, 2009 at 6:00 PM
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