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Re: Yellowrose55

Very true... the old jazz has a very rich inspiring tone, it's difficult not to be inspired by it sometimes

posted by lionreign on June 1, 2009 at 2:26 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Amazing just simply amazing the flow the stlye and of course, the magic!

thank you very very much

posted by lionreign on June 1, 2009 at 2:11 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Merkie

Thanks - glad you read and enjoyed it

posted by lionreign on June 1, 2009 at 2:06 AM | link to this | reply

Jazz will do it every time...and your poem is so sultry.

posted by yellowrose55 on May 31, 2009 at 6:47 PM | link to this | reply

Amazing just simply amazing the flow the stlye and of course, the magic!

posted by Mystereo on May 28, 2009 at 4:44 PM | link to this | reply

Wow Sultry music!

posted by merkie on May 28, 2009 at 4:34 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Amazing tale my dear Lion

Thank you, my dear, I am so glad you read and enjoyed this one

posted by lionreign on May 28, 2009 at 10:41 AM | link to this | reply

Re: This is an amazing poem. Outstanding imagery. Wow !

Thank you!!

posted by lionreign on May 28, 2009 at 10:40 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome

Thank you so much! This poem sprang for a moment of profound inspiration and I really wanted your thoughts on it because I felt it was a little more than my normal poems. Thank you for coming

posted by lionreign on May 28, 2009 at 9:57 AM | link to this | reply

Re: chuck_ibrahim

thank you for coming to share it with me

posted by lionreign on May 28, 2009 at 9:54 AM | link to this | reply

Re: sam444

Thank you Sam, I am a little proud of this one and I really felt it was a little more special than my usual work, but I really wanted some more opinions on that - I am considering using this one as a competition piece and wanted a few unbiaesed eyes to read it.

posted by lionreign on May 28, 2009 at 9:48 AM | link to this | reply

Re: A delicious one......

Thank you Sue

posted by lionreign on May 28, 2009 at 9:40 AM | link to this | reply

Amazing tale my dear Lion

Absolutely beautifully done; the imagery is wonderful and so powerful! Many blessings and thanks for sharing this beauty my friend

posted by mariaki on May 28, 2009 at 4:46 AM | link to this | reply

This is an amazing poem. Outstanding imagery. Wow !

posted by HarvestMoon on May 27, 2009 at 8:34 PM | link to this | reply

You had me at the first paragraph :-) An amazing poem... I was there! I felt the sensual ambiance and heard the mellow music... watched you surrender to her eyes... Your words brought it all to me with such force that I forgot to breathe as I was reading them :-) I literally held my breath till the last verse was done. Suzy said it... delicious , but I would ad intoxicating... for like a good wine it seized my senses and I'm sure will linger in my mind long after today. Bravo!

posted by Sinome on May 27, 2009 at 2:37 PM | link to this | reply

Nice imagery

keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing.

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on May 27, 2009 at 1:51 PM | link to this | reply

Sue's comment is too precious! Astonishing, I hope you are proud and delighted with yourself on this poem! It is absolutely wonderful! I read it three times, I could have read it more it is so good! I liked the weaving of the sounds, even to the point of an echo! The similes were so apropos, too! I was touched on all my senses, perhaps delicious is an awesome term! I think what I was most taken with was the perfect weaving of all the nuances of the evening you so exquisitely painted! My hat is tipped! Well constructed indeed! Fabulous imagery! sam