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Great imagery........
posted by
shamasehar
on May 26, 2009 at 8:48 AM
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so evocative
I like this a lot!!!
posted by
lionreign
on May 26, 2009 at 8:41 AM
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Very well expressed!
posted by
Chilitree
on May 25, 2009 at 10:55 PM
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Beach party time with froth and fizzle. Sounds like fun!
posted by
merkie
on May 25, 2009 at 7:48 PM
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With your lances afire the skies to ransom I thought this was a very poignant line! Wonderful imagery throughout too! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 25, 2009 at 9:46 AM
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