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Sometimes...silence is more of what we need than words. Sometimes the silence will heal more than anything else. This is simply beautiful Marta - and it made my heart cry as much as it hoped.
posted by
NiteTide
on June 8, 2009 at 5:38 PM
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This entry makes me remember back to when. . ,
I was comforting this woman whose husband of a very long time had just up and left her. I remember telling her that everything would be better. ., that she would learn to love again. At the same time, my heart was breaking for her time. Nice poem.
posted by
Joe_Love
on May 26, 2009 at 5:10 PM
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Superb! Such perfect word-imagery, from the abyss to the skies, and so my Marta princess- like xoxoxo
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 25, 2009 at 10:43 PM
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Sinome
Yes, when she gets home luv;"
Yes, my heart knows one day there will be no more pain......"
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 25, 2009 at 8:50 PM
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Your words are touching, healing and always beautiful.

posted by
yellowrose55
on May 25, 2009 at 8:49 PM
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this makes me think of my friend who lost his wife
posted by
Lanetay
on May 25, 2009 at 8:38 PM
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Beautiful
for me this captured the helplessness I feel to watch another's heart break, the feeling that all the truths are so inadequate in the face of their pain along with the compassion and comfort offered by just being there for them. I think this is just brilliant
posted by
lionreign
on May 25, 2009 at 10:07 AM
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Beautifully written Sinome
inspiring comfort and hope; excellent poem; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on May 25, 2009 at 5:08 AM
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This is so comforting and encouraging; thanks! Thanks too for your very kind comments on my post. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on May 25, 2009 at 2:31 AM
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Heartfelt. Thank you.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on May 25, 2009 at 1:13 AM
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Haunting...well done indeed!


posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 24, 2009 at 10:58 PM
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Compassion at work! Kudos.

posted by
hardilaziz
on May 24, 2009 at 7:06 PM
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u are a true friend......
posted by
Star5_
on May 24, 2009 at 5:26 PM
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I think this is one of the most difficult things to do too! It just breaks while it keeps beat! Kind of an eerie essence to it with the close of heart beating! KUDOS!!! sammie [loves you]


xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on May 24, 2009 at 5:00 PM
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This poem is full of love and care and I can relate ...
posted by
Chilitree
on May 24, 2009 at 3:58 PM
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The heart sure takes a lot.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 24, 2009 at 3:28 PM
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