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Re: Storm ... this one is for you... and your writing has much depth.,
Thank you. The one u have written is very well written and beautiful as well. Chilitree

posted by Storm1973 on May 24, 2009 at 4:45 AM | link to this | reply

Storm ... this one is for you... and your writing has much depth.,

Little planet

Being stripped

By its appointed

Caretakers

Little round

Spinning

Blue beauty

Being drilled

And emptied

By chief

Ambitious

Creatures

Manipulated

By dark shadows

Copulating

In their

Hearts.

posted by Chilitree on May 23, 2009 at 11:40 PM | link to this | reply

It's simply beautiful and so well written .

posted by afzal50 on May 23, 2009 at 9:30 PM | link to this | reply