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..to bear this prayer...
Exquisite - like a superb photograph of life...
posted by
Maryka77
on May 19, 2009 at 4:11 PM
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love it
posted by
contagion_publishing
on May 19, 2009 at 10:27 AM
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Poignant plea to the Lord and mankind! Very exquisite imagery with great cadence! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 19, 2009 at 6:16 AM
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Amazing piece!! A soldier of all that is just and all that are oppressed. Commendable!
posted by
calia14
on May 18, 2009 at 10:48 PM
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Chilling....yet I am so drawn to it, I had to read it three times over before I could comment. There is nothing I can say to bring this poem justice. It IS justice.
posted by
NiteTide
on May 18, 2009 at 7:03 PM
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If I die before I wake
A very haunting poem and very inspirational. Your sentiments are spot on. As long as we have breath within us we should try to change the world in whatever way we can, however small. It's all about spreading our light.
posted by
2Philomena
on May 18, 2009 at 5:16 PM
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Powerful poignant poetry! Vivdly stirs awareness in the battle of survival!
posted by
merkie
on May 18, 2009 at 10:55 AM
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