Go to Calia's Poetry Corner
- Add a comment
- Go to Dejected
Re: Whoa! Off The Meter! You said it well a mind's eye open poem, knowledge of
Thanks mystereo! I love it when you come through and look at all of the old poems, it makes me revisit them!
posted by
calia14
on May 30, 2009 at 1:00 PM
| link to this | reply
Whoa! Off The Meter! You said it well a mind's eye open poem, knowledge of
one's self! Key.
posted by
Mystereo
on May 30, 2009 at 7:07 AM
| link to this | reply
Sometimes it is hard to know we can make a difference in the scheme of things!
posted by
merkie
on May 16, 2009 at 4:59 PM
| link to this | reply
Excellent poem.
I feel this way sometimes...
posted by
yellowrose55
on May 16, 2009 at 2:56 PM
| link to this | reply
posted by
Star5_
on May 15, 2009 at 9:33 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: bhaskar
what a thoughtful and uplifting comment! Thanks!
posted by
calia14
on May 15, 2009 at 2:41 PM
| link to this | reply
Re: fsi
What a thought! I love that song, it is true, what a perfect fit that is!
posted by
calia14
on May 15, 2009 at 2:39 PM
| link to this | reply
I feel for you...
Yet this impenetrable bleakness
Threatens to consume the light.
I don't believe it will....
Meditate on this:
'All that came to be was alive with his life, and that light was the light of men. The light shines on in the dark, and the darkness has never mastered it.' - John 1, vv.4-5
posted by
Raphael222
on May 15, 2009 at 7:55 AM
| link to this | reply
This shall pass too.......dispelling darkness light will shine again.
posted by
shamasehar
on May 15, 2009 at 6:56 AM
| link to this | reply
an artful description of dejection...not to last for too long I hope ....
posted by
mariss9
on May 14, 2009 at 10:00 PM
| link to this | reply
Makes me think of the Rolling Stones song "Paint It Black."
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 14, 2009 at 3:55 PM
| link to this | reply
..an accurate... and brilliant intuitve obsevation...
of the current vibes... by a gifted poet... well done.
posted by
MasonGarrett
on May 14, 2009 at 1:47 PM
| link to this | reply
Very nicely done
many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on May 14, 2009 at 4:49 AM
| link to this | reply
Soon you are coming back rejuvenated calia. Melancholy is ephemeral
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 14, 2009 at 12:34 AM
| link to this | reply
...to consume the light...
Nicely written. I like it.
Kathy
posted by
Maryka77
on May 13, 2009 at 10:34 PM
| link to this | reply
Superb...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 13, 2009 at 10:16 PM
| link to this | reply
All it takes is one moment, one smile, one piece of hope to life those layers of gray, love. Perhaps not fully, but just enough to know we can move on.
posted by
NiteTide
on May 13, 2009 at 10:08 PM
| link to this | reply
Excellent!
posted by
Kayzzaman
on May 13, 2009 at 9:15 PM
| link to this | reply
posted by
Star5_
on May 13, 2009 at 9:12 PM
| link to this | reply