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Sorry for the tardiness. I got caught up in work and this is the time I could make it. Another wonderful poem, artistically created!! But I think you have done a quatrain poem and not a kyrielle
Remember, a kyrielle needs to have 8 syllables in every line and must have the last line of the first stanza as the final refrain for the rest of the stanzas. Don't get me wrong though! This is a BEAUTIFUL piece!
posted by
NiteTide
on May 12, 2009 at 6:11 PM
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...Please help this boat to the shore..
a plea, a prayer and a life..beautifully done.
Kathy
posted by
Maryka77
on May 12, 2009 at 12:56 AM
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