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Beautiful!
I'm speechless. I don't think words can describe. I felt every emotion that you put into this. It was a wonderful ride.
posted by
Toastpcs
on May 12, 2009 at 9:16 PM
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So beautifully written!!
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posted by
DeAnna_Star
on May 12, 2009 at 2:24 PM
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Wonderful, compassionate, sincere! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on May 12, 2009 at 12:50 PM
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such a loving and beautiful sentiment
This is truly heart warming, my friend
posted by
lionreign
on May 12, 2009 at 7:31 AM
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Childlike love cares for brothers and sisters on Mother Earth. BCA, BillJRoost
posted by
BC-A
on May 12, 2009 at 7:25 AM
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Re: I hope your ok? expressed very well........I am good .....
posted by
Star5_
on May 12, 2009 at 5:43 AM
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I hope your ok? expressed very well.
posted by
_Symphony_
on May 12, 2009 at 5:24 AM
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Re: Hiya, Star........somebody who loves me a lot going through roughness,
so I am praying......I know few people who are truly hurt due to different issues,so a humble request to god......
posted by
Star5_
on May 12, 2009 at 5:11 AM
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Beautiful Sue
you are obviously the sort of person to have in my world my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on May 12, 2009 at 3:21 AM
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...and please hold the one in pain until they sleep and dream..
I had to read it again..the lines are awesome, just beautiful, one of my favorites on Blogit..lately.
Kathy
posted by
Maryka77
on May 12, 2009 at 1:16 AM
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..never want another heart to hurt like I did..
This is a beautiful poem, so sad, so real, so kind and generous..
posted by
Maryka77
on May 12, 2009 at 1:13 AM
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Hiya, Star
I felt both happy for the loving words expressed in this poem, yet somehow sad at the same time.
posted by
Joe_Love
on May 11, 2009 at 11:16 PM
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Hope you all are well...........
posted by
Star5_
on May 11, 2009 at 7:24 PM
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