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                Beautiful! I must check out Nitetide's link. Thank you.  
                
                    posted by
                    elinjo
                     on May 15, 2009 at 10:26 PM
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                Wow , Great poem Vicky!

 It is fun to try new forms.  
                
                    posted by
                    merkie
                     on May 14, 2009 at 6:24 PM
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                You made good use of the form.  
                
                    posted by
                    FormerStudentIntern
                     on May 9, 2009 at 3:58 PM
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                I came by for another read; this is very good yellowrose! sam 
 
  
                
                    posted by
                    sam444
                     on May 9, 2009 at 6:47 AM
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                Well done indeed! Fine imagery too! sam 
 
  
                
                    posted by
                    sam444
                     on May 8, 2009 at 10:19 PM
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                Good example of Sedoka. I'd do some research on this form. 
 
  
                
                    posted by
                    hardilaziz
                     on May 8, 2009 at 8:30 PM
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                    I love it. Beautiful, and yes, Nite Tide is the shit. xoxoox
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    hazel_st_cricket
                     on May 8, 2009 at 8:07 PM
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