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...shiny pearls..
I like this poem - very peaceful.
Kathy
posted by
Maryka77
on May 8, 2009 at 9:30 PM
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Wonderful; I would be inspired to write as well! Peace and blessings Mariaki! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on May 8, 2009 at 8:17 PM
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beautiful and inspiring poem Maria.
posted by
muley12
on May 8, 2009 at 2:12 AM
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mariaki
Very sweet cadence, Maria, and Deepak Chopra's saying is exhorting one to be like the eye of the storm, which is always still
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 7, 2009 at 7:31 PM
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Oh, I can feel the inspiration and, yes, that's right, this poem reads like a song.
posted by
vogue
on May 7, 2009 at 3:08 PM
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This poem sings
and dances across the ballroom of my imagination. Bravo, dear one!
posted by
lionreign
on May 7, 2009 at 10:45 AM
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This spreads peace like a velvet blanket of inspiration Sigh!
posted by
merkie
on May 7, 2009 at 9:19 AM
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How Awesome!
I Love It!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on May 7, 2009 at 8:27 AM
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A MAGICAL FLOW ON THIS NIGHT! VERY NICE.
posted by
shamasehar
on May 7, 2009 at 7:55 AM
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This poem is great!
I felt the music in this poem...the Music of the Night....
More than that, Deepak Chopra, to me, is the greatest man I have ever had the privilege to briefly meet once. I have read his books many times over....so trust me, I know where you are coming from....the still, peaceful center in the midst of the chaos.
Finally: Your lines, "On a night like tonight..." together with your word pictures and repetitions..of your inspiration, I could hear quite clearly the song from Evita sung by the man that takes her to Buenos Aires and seduces her. I think it is a tango.
Your poem is full of light, color and music ---- it makes me want to paint a picture!
(If you haven't seen the movie Evita wth Madonna and Antonio Banderas, do rent it.
It is awesome, gripping...a rock opera at its very best..it leaves you breathless!)
Just like your poem does! Brilliant!
Raphael.
posted by
Raphael222
on May 7, 2009 at 2:48 AM
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