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Sinome
A wonderful welcome for spring luv....
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 7, 2009 at 5:24 PM
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this is pure enchantments
new beginnings and new beginnings... days, seasons, life... brightly written, dear friend, brightly written indeed
posted by
lionreign
on May 7, 2009 at 10:31 AM
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Superb moment of a new beginning Sinome!
beautifully told as always; totally awesome my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on May 7, 2009 at 3:19 AM
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Shucks! The rain is taking away all the fun of spring.
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 6, 2009 at 11:08 PM
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What a gorgeous end of one moment into a flourishing beginning of another. This is a stunning piece, Marta. I can feel spring, even through the rain that's been pouring here.
posted by
NiteTide
on May 6, 2009 at 9:19 PM
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Wonderful spring ...........
posted by
afzal50
on May 6, 2009 at 8:14 PM
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Beautiful Spring Sinome
posted by
shobana
on May 6, 2009 at 8:11 PM
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A great feeling that is.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 6, 2009 at 7:11 PM
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In a mere blink of an eye, the Spring shall gently turn to Autumn.
We must drink of it now, while it graces us with her presence. Wonderful poem.
posted by
tessmae
on May 6, 2009 at 5:11 PM
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Beautiful poem !!!!!!!!!!!!
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on May 6, 2009 at 2:58 PM
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Spring is as cute as a fresh poem like yours. BCA, Bill*s Roost
posted by
BC-A
on May 6, 2009 at 2:21 PM
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Beautiful essence of spring and the warm renewal it brings Sigh!
posted by
merkie
on May 6, 2009 at 11:33 AM
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very cute poem
posted by
Lanetay
on May 6, 2009 at 11:26 AM
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Re: oops mastery
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 6, 2009 at 8:56 AM
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The movement of the mood with the movement of the seasons, with Nature - the organic union of the outer and the inner, the connection and connectivity, all done in a style which is nothing short of mastrey. Extremely exotic, as comes so naturally to you, my dear princess of the ocean kissed sands. xoxoxoxo
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 6, 2009 at 8:56 AM
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Yes indeed! Spring is here! I love the imagery, it starts out melancholy and ends on such a high note! KUDOS! Love you mostest! sammie
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on May 6, 2009 at 8:45 AM
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Re: Sinome
Agreed! A charming and optimistic poem.
posted by
elinjo
on May 6, 2009 at 8:40 AM
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Sinome
At first the poem was making me feel quite sad – that “she” felt more comfort in slumber than being away. But then, you brought me to “her” appreciation for the signs of spring outside and how those made the spirit awaken with joy. Good progression – excellent write!
posted by
Troosha
on May 6, 2009 at 7:57 AM
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