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Thank you for your comments on Poetic Passion
I liked this poem, too.
"I have won" - this is said so peacefully and quietly, yet it is absolutely triumphant. Not many people can say this honestly.
I, too, feel I am getting close to the finishing line and I am in front.. It has taken over 60 years but I can almost echo your sentiments.
I am really glad to have met you and to read your poems.
Raphael.
posted by
Raphael222
on May 7, 2009 at 8:31 AM
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I can always count on you to start my day off on a good note.
posted by
muley12
on May 7, 2009 at 2:22 AM
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Doubt is one word, enlightened decisionmaking is another. Only the knower knows, the mind-reader cannot know!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 6, 2009 at 11:26 PM
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Inspiring as always ...
posted by
afzal50
on May 6, 2009 at 8:23 PM
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wow...
posted by
Star5_
on May 6, 2009 at 7:17 PM
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So grand a battle won.YES!
posted by
merkie
on May 6, 2009 at 11:56 AM
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Exellent!
I Love It.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on May 6, 2009 at 7:59 AM
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Mariaki
Isn’t it grand when we feel we have won that internal battle! I live for those moments! Yet another excellent message today....
posted by
Troosha
on May 6, 2009 at 6:39 AM
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wonderful
and very true.. I think nature is the guide to serenity for most of us
posted by
lionreign
on May 6, 2009 at 5:56 AM
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Wonderful imagery! I have dealt with internal battles myself! Thank goodness for the Lord! Peace and blessings Mariaki! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on May 6, 2009 at 5:36 AM
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wonderfully written..
posted by
_Symphony_
on May 6, 2009 at 5:23 AM
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