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Beautiful!

posted by MomentsinTime on June 8, 2009 at 12:12 AM | link to this | reply

cool and straight to the point well done

posted by spiderfly on May 4, 2009 at 9:35 PM | link to this | reply

Down to earth emotions penned on life's page.Well done!

posted by merkie on May 4, 2009 at 9:30 PM | link to this | reply

So nice to know that one is loved, knows it and appreciates it as well! Wonderful imagery too! sam

posted by sam444 on May 4, 2009 at 8:42 PM | link to this | reply

that's so cool....

posted by Star5_ on May 4, 2009 at 4:55 PM | link to this | reply

Powerful, evocative....

I really liked this poem which, for me, brought out the tender, loving, sensual feelings of its characters. It was made me "feel".

Keep writing!

Jonathan  aka 'Raphael'

 

posted by Raphael222 on May 4, 2009 at 4:52 PM | link to this | reply