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Such eloquence of wisdom, Merkie!
Perfect!
posted by
Katray2
on May 4, 2009 at 11:13 AM
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Very philosophical today, Merkie. This I especially liked: A place of peace and love,Designed at mysterious latitude,in the universe we share. Great work!
posted by
Troosha
on May 4, 2009 at 9:54 AM
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Great combination..........free will & reposibilities! Great poem.
posted by
shamasehar
on May 4, 2009 at 8:41 AM
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Superb!!
Great poem throughout but that last line raises it to genius! Love this beyond words
posted by
lionreign
on May 4, 2009 at 8:24 AM
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A stupendous piece my dear!
Free will and responsibility, yes, if we all took our share life would be so different; beautifully depicted and thoroughly enjoyable read; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on May 4, 2009 at 3:48 AM
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free wiil& all the rest of your writings
have enjoyed it ALL and look forward to coming back in a few months and see what else you have created.you take a handful of words, throw them in the wind, and they land beautifully every time.Appreciate the comments and kudos on my entries.I have to go thru another 8 week session of chemo, but hope to be back by August.Take care and God bless.
RAY(SONGS)
posted by
raywords
on May 4, 2009 at 2:03 AM
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I could hear music as I read your poem Merkie. Your poem dances on the moment and the future with delight. So positive and spirited.
posted by
yellowrose55
on May 3, 2009 at 9:33 PM
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great one again love how do you poets keep 'em coming!
posted by
Kabu
on May 3, 2009 at 9:06 PM
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Enjoyed this very much! Beautifully expressed.
posted by
Chilitree
on May 3, 2009 at 7:41 PM
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not sure about the inspired by the future
posted by
Lanetay
on May 3, 2009 at 4:42 PM
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A supremely superb ending! I was blown away. It is very true - if we take responsibility...we have our own free well...when we are irresponsible, our free will shortens....
posted by
NiteTide
on May 3, 2009 at 2:45 PM
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Free Will
Stunning imagery
posted by
2Philomena
on May 3, 2009 at 11:41 AM
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No one can be against us! This is filled with wonderful imagery Merkie! KUDOS!!! sam/Shelly
posted by
sam444
on May 3, 2009 at 11:40 AM
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Incredibly vivid & wise! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on May 3, 2009 at 10:40 AM
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