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The romance of your words always put my heart at a flutter. The image you put in my mind is so vividly clear that I feel like I am there - actually, I more feel like I WANT to be there. Your poetry brings out my hopeless romantic side, and I always end up sighing in complete happiness. This poem makes no difference. I'm at a loss of words as I imagine that window...and the thoughts that are fluttering through the mind...it is a whimsical and beautiful image.
posted by
NiteTide
on May 3, 2009 at 9:46 PM
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Simone
The horizon you painted with mere words was quite beautiful. The story you wove into the description was very sad.
posted by
Joe_Love
on May 3, 2009 at 7:13 PM
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As much as I love living where I do, there's nothing more I'd rather see right now than "...
a majestic mountain, tall and true, humbling all with its might..." I love the way you describe nature in your poetry.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 3, 2009 at 4:30 PM
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very nicely written
posted by
Lanetay
on May 3, 2009 at 1:12 PM
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I wonder if you think of us
A wonderful evocation of the beauties of nature!
posted by
2Philomena
on May 3, 2009 at 11:50 AM
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Most excellent imagery! I was left to ponder my own thoughts of what someone might be thinking about me too! Love you the mosest too! sammie
xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on May 3, 2009 at 6:53 AM
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Strikes a chord with me...
posted by
Straightforward
on May 3, 2009 at 5:58 AM
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Poignant and evocative; you have a wonderful way with thoughts and words! Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on May 3, 2009 at 4:31 AM
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...as someone trying to escape would...
I like this poem...nicely written...you can feel it...Kathy
posted by
Maryka77
on May 2, 2009 at 6:30 PM
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Sinome
Thunder interrupted my afternoon rest today as well luv but I couldn't have expressed that thought as beautifully as do you, always.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 2, 2009 at 6:05 PM
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I really enjoyed reading this.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 2, 2009 at 5:54 PM
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hello poet finally home and so happy to read perfection
from a real poet! you are special indeed
posted by
lestate7
on May 2, 2009 at 4:21 PM
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A moment by the window you turn into a creative journey through the loving heart and mind. Pondering...Nice one Sinome.
posted by
yellowrose55
on May 2, 2009 at 3:35 PM
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