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...ripping my soul to pieces..
I think about this subject so often..its hard to 'shed the past'..I like your style of short and extremely to the point. You have said so much here.
Kathy
posted by
Maryka77
on May 8, 2009 at 10:20 PM
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Yes, I prefer it that way. I shed so many things daily- it keeps me light!
posted by
hardilaziz
on May 7, 2009 at 6:42 PM
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F A N T A S T I C ! yellowrose ... 'shedding the past'.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on May 6, 2009 at 9:46 PM
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Excellent!
posted by
Katray2
on May 5, 2009 at 9:09 PM
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Nitetide said pretty much what I was going to say!
posted by
calia14
on May 5, 2009 at 9:08 PM
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yellowrose
Very good!!
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on May 4, 2009 at 10:34 AM
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Very elegant
I like this a great deal - painting flowers in a storm is a beautiful and powerful image
posted by
lionreign
on May 4, 2009 at 7:22 AM
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Well stated, my friend...excellent illustration!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on May 3, 2009 at 10:02 PM
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powerful. The flower in the midst of the storm is an amazing image - and an incredibly powerful message that runs through the rest of your poem. Amazingly done!
posted by
NiteTide
on May 3, 2009 at 9:48 PM
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time to shed the past... intriguing poem.
posted by
tessmae
on May 3, 2009 at 7:46 PM
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Tiome to shed the past ... I like this poem very much.
posted by
Chilitree
on May 3, 2009 at 7:45 PM
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Ready for the new day! The past a lesson! Bravo Vicky!
posted by
merkie
on May 3, 2009 at 7:31 PM
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The past is sometimes difficult to shed...
but what a relief when one can look to the future with anticipation.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 3, 2009 at 6:02 PM
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Amen! Head into the future! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 3, 2009 at 6:24 AM
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I love the ending. Thanks for stopping by. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on May 3, 2009 at 4:38 AM
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Moving on a difficult thing to do but sometimes we just have to.
posted by
Kabu
on May 2, 2009 at 9:48 PM
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Maybe not shedding the past...unless you can eliminate memory....but being more focused on the present!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on May 2, 2009 at 7:09 PM
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Letting go of the past can be very tough to do.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 2, 2009 at 5:04 PM
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