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..Even if you ever die at all from me....I will remember your heart..
so moving and so uplifting..Beautiful.   kathy

posted by Maryka77 on May 2, 2009 at 7:05 PM | link to this | reply

Incredible.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 2, 2009 at 5:48 PM | link to this | reply

What a beautiful poem! Loved it.

posted by shamasehar on May 2, 2009 at 7:28 AM | link to this | reply

Smileycons! Lovely!

posted by BrightIrish on May 1, 2009 at 7:47 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful work Kayzzaman

posted by shobana on May 1, 2009 at 7:14 PM | link to this | reply

A spirtual postcard.

posted by BC-A on May 1, 2009 at 3:01 PM | link to this | reply

And I will remember your heart
As saying for ever to me, only to me:

"A little while,
A moment of rest upon the wind,
And another woman will bear me.”

What an excellent conclusion Kazz! I love your poetry! sam

posted by sam444 on May 1, 2009 at 7:31 AM | link to this | reply