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I'm loving this.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 2, 2009 at 5:53 PM
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I just walked in the situation here love. BCA, Bill*s Roost
posted by
BC-A
on May 1, 2009 at 2:55 PM
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sinome
Elegant!!
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on May 1, 2009 at 10:06 AM
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You have described the rain so perfectly and though it does not seem to change or alter the beat of the city streets, in the forest it can be magical, cleansing music. Another beauty, Sinome.
posted by
Troosha
on May 1, 2009 at 7:51 AM
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This phrase is particularly pleasing :'it drenched the trees, the soil, my soul' because it marks a transition between the description of the rain and how you feel.
posted by
elinjo
on May 1, 2009 at 7:22 AM
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Rain is good in the Springtime, especially if you are not conflicted....
posted by
WindTapper
on May 1, 2009 at 6:39 AM
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I loved the conclusion with its awesome oxymoron! The rain is soothing when a mist and a torrent when it is not! Superb imagery! All my love for it is the mostest! sammie
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on May 1, 2009 at 6:26 AM
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I am astounded
by the breadth and versatility of your poetic talent... I feel sucked into the visions you present
posted by
lionreign
on May 1, 2009 at 4:49 AM
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breathless....
This poem is amazing because the whole time I'm seeing the beautiful images you make with your words as the rain saturates the trees and darkens them and brightens the leaves...It's all beautiful and misleadingly makes you believe all will be well...but there is a subtle twist at the end, with the rain screaming and calling a name...making me realize that this might be the end, and the rain has come to wash away everything else, make everything new again, to start fresh. A most amazing read, Marta.
posted by
NiteTide
on May 1, 2009 at 12:25 AM
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The rain makes for fresh beginnings Sinome..
posted by
shobana
on April 30, 2009 at 11:23 PM
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. Aww, there goes my pricess again, wet and ocean kissed xoxoxo -: )
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 30, 2009 at 9:53 PM
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posted by
Samantha39
on April 30, 2009 at 9:23 PM
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Beautiful rain indeed ...
posted by
afzal50
on April 30, 2009 at 8:32 PM
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rain.......
posted by
Star5_
on April 30, 2009 at 8:02 PM
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