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I could so relate to this poem! What awesome imagery too! Love you! sammie
xoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on May 1, 2009 at 6:23 AM
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Sinome
This reminds me of a certain piece by Chopin, though unfortunately I can't remember the name...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 30, 2009 at 5:53 PM
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Such tender melancholy
and beautiful sadness - this is wonderfully done but sometimes I can't help but long to hear your melancholy tones replaced with happiness
posted by
lionreign
on April 30, 2009 at 8:49 AM
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Sinome, in this poem I hear Vishnu.....
Vishnu my older son writes poems......often for his friends......that's what he give for the friends.....sometimes he talks about love.....he say kind of tunes like this....
sometimes when he speaks to me, I feel that he is singing.....sometimes he speaks to me, I feel little mad too....
Sue9457
posted by
Star5_
on April 30, 2009 at 8:00 AM
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Beautiful and passionate piece Sinome
excellent indeed; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on April 30, 2009 at 2:47 AM
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The dark side is very active....even in a cool fire!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 29, 2009 at 11:56 PM
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Sinome
So passionately written..Great
posted by
shobana
on April 29, 2009 at 10:37 PM
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Sinome
What atmosphere, what imagery, what painting you can work out with those word-magic at your command! This one related to mine own, because my dreams did not come true, yet when I see my old flame, something in my heart starts to burn
. Kudos to my princess for taking me down memory lane
xoxoxo.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 29, 2009 at 10:10 PM
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Fleeting moment of attraction ,kindred spirits winking in lovelights!Sigh!
posted by
merkie
on April 29, 2009 at 9:30 PM
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Sinome
Sadly, love missed with it's arrow luv............
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 29, 2009 at 7:12 PM
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how sad
posted by
Lanetay
on April 29, 2009 at 4:44 PM
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Heart wrenching to say the least. But was it really a denial of love, or was a run from the possibility of love? This poem made me wonder these things, as the speaker kept repeating, "It was not love." Was it truly not a love, or so much love, it was frightening?
Fantastic write, Marta! I love you how always make me think outside of the box!
posted by
NiteTide
on April 29, 2009 at 1:32 PM
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Such incredibly strong words. So much emotion there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 29, 2009 at 12:04 PM
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powerful lines and a great read.
posted by
spiderfly
on April 29, 2009 at 11:53 AM
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It was not love... no passionate force shook our souls.
It was more like a slight breeze that gets lost in the wind.
These words are so very true! Wow! This is incredulous imagery my dear Sinome! I thought many lines were very powerful but the two I highlighted seemed so universal! Sammie loves you and forget the lines I cited, lol! xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on April 29, 2009 at 11:47 AM
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WOW !!!!!!!!! Amazing poem !!! xooxoxxxxx
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on April 29, 2009 at 11:02 AM
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