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nail it all the time Sinome. The is a heart stopper.
posted by
yellowrose55
on April 29, 2009 at 11:22 PM
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And so to dream once again! Well done Sinome!
posted by
merkie
on April 29, 2009 at 9:29 PM
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So much to ponder.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 29, 2009 at 12:03 PM
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So sadly intense
opportunity discarded... romance refused... such utterly splendid writing, I cannot help but care about your subjects
posted by
lionreign
on April 29, 2009 at 8:58 AM
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Evocative and beautiful!
posted by
Nita09
on April 29, 2009 at 8:49 AM
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What an awesome conclusion my dear Sinome! I did not expect it! It was so good to read your imagery again! You know how much I love it sweetie! I had so much fun with Vickip.!!!! My goodness what a special human being! We have to get together with her! She is soooooo funny! I missed you too! And I love you the MOSTEST!!!!!!! sammy (I have been gone too long, I forgot if it is 'ie' or 'my' on sammie, ugh) OMW Vicki can cook! We had the tastiest Sockeye salmon!!! YUMMY!!!!! Another great reason to catch up with her! She is too modest and won't take any credit but I am telling you even a sandwich is incredible! I don't like to eat and I just said no once because I had a headache and food was the last thing on my mind! lol
xoxoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on April 29, 2009 at 2:04 AM
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A magical dream- two lovers without a care in the world!
posted by
hardilaziz
on April 29, 2009 at 12:23 AM
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Romantic, sweet, and heartbreaking.
posted by
calia14
on April 28, 2009 at 11:54 PM
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Aptly titled....and conquered!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 28, 2009 at 10:22 PM
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Sinome
"I think it will be better for you never to know what could have been and as for me... let this be nothing but a dream", such a memorable imagery as to almost physically feel it, touch it, smell it, and yet so distant, hovering between a past reality and an immediate memory. Another, beautiful, beautifully evocative poem from my dear princess. 
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posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 28, 2009 at 9:14 PM
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A dream is like an endless love story that never ends Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on April 28, 2009 at 8:11 PM
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It is a beautiful dream Sinome
posted by
shobana
on April 28, 2009 at 7:17 PM
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Hi,and hello again, and Im glad I caught this one. I just dropped in to see if anything changed--hey you've been writing the same poem, and quite necessarily,taking it and exploring it for almost a year.
What really caught my eye here,was the subtle change of self-realization and syntax....a real subtle puff in the socks!
Maybe I don't know which way the the wind is blowing, but I got my feet up pointing at the sky.
Really liked how you worked this one,
John
posted by
jfm32
on April 28, 2009 at 6:32 PM
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erotic, exciting, and sad all at the same time.
posted by
muley12
on April 28, 2009 at 6:18 PM
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Very Nice!
posted by
BrightIrish
on April 28, 2009 at 5:23 PM
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Nice job!
Isn't infatuation a lovely thing.
posted by
Joe_Love
on April 28, 2009 at 4:31 PM
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Dreams as such die a hard, sad death.
Dreaming is so much better at times than facing the reality in which we live.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on April 28, 2009 at 2:08 PM
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Marta, this is a well-written expression that speaks to the heart. Keep on!
posted by
Texas_Gem
on April 28, 2009 at 2:01 PM
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Ah, love from afar...this a poem after my own heart. We hold all the memories while the other person has no idea...
But this poem is more than beautiful, Marta, this was a touch to my own soul, endlessly lovely and memorable.
posted by
NiteTide
on April 28, 2009 at 1:05 PM
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posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on April 28, 2009 at 12:40 PM
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