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Loved the questioning in the last part! Excellent one to ponder! sam/ Shelly
posted by
sam444
on April 29, 2009 at 12:22 PM
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Oh Merkie
this is such an enchanting thought and poem... I am quite enthralled
posted by
lionreign
on April 29, 2009 at 8:24 AM
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This is really beautiful....
A natural poetry path
Hearts and hands join in love.
And long after, in the mist, the rainbow.....
To my way of thinking, these sort of reminiscences in poetry never die. The memory is now in the rainbow, and every trime there is a rainbow, the memory is with it: Hearts and hands walking in love...the natural way.
We create from the raw material of life the most beautiful things: we take after Our Creator, we create and make the deserts bloom. 
Lovely work.
Jonathan aka 'Raphael'
Thank you for your encouraging remarks about my poems, too!
posted by
Raphael222
on April 29, 2009 at 12:37 AM
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misty lines of verse...love it!
posted by
calia14
on April 28, 2009 at 11:57 PM
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I had my share of passing parades. I understand!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 28, 2009 at 10:30 PM
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Fine romantic images...
posted by
mariss9
on April 28, 2009 at 9:41 PM
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beautiful poem
thanks for sharing.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on April 28, 2009 at 8:36 PM
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Nice Poem
Thanks for sharing. 
posted by
Kolekshuns
on April 28, 2009 at 8:17 PM
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...long after the rainbow passes by...
Very nice poem. Kathy
posted by
Maryka77
on April 28, 2009 at 5:29 PM
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Merkie, you have painted a beautiful scene with this poem!
posted by
Texas_Gem
on April 28, 2009 at 1:46 PM
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"Do roses grow together? / bound in love?" --> what a lovely image. The thorns holding them tighter together...and never letting go.
posted by
NiteTide
on April 28, 2009 at 1:29 PM
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posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on April 28, 2009 at 12:19 PM
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Wonderful use of words! God bless. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on April 28, 2009 at 9:35 AM
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