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Such poignant reflection! I liked the imagery and its symbolism! Love to you! sammie
xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on May 1, 2009 at 6:19 AM
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I like this a lot with the use of the temple.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 27, 2009 at 8:40 PM
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All decays.....the good, the bad and the ugly. Only the eternal soul lasts. It is to be trusted, above all else!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 27, 2009 at 8:02 PM
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Darling I agree so much with our Wiley, I shall just add me too.
posted by
Kabu
on April 27, 2009 at 6:43 PM
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Sinome
I just love your soul and how you spill it out here luv, wonderful
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 27, 2009 at 6:25 PM
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What an image, Sinome. I felt as if I were there in person and I kept taking very careful steps and looking for snakes. I felt as if one of the large vines would turn into an ever-watchful boa constrictor that would unhinge its jaws and try to swallow my head. Beautiful!
posted by
TAPS.
on April 27, 2009 at 8:36 AM
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A beautiful piece my dear Sinome
excellent imagery and a superbly told tale; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on April 27, 2009 at 5:10 AM
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Beautiful, beautiful poem, my friend
This is not a thing to read - it is an experience, a moment from your mind which we can share with utter clarity, flavoured by your nostalgia, and the yearnings of your wonderful heart.
Well done, indeed
posted by
lionreign
on April 27, 2009 at 4:04 AM
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so lovely
This is so beautiful. Childhood promises, love, memories all make u who we are today! So well written!
posted by
Primroses
on April 27, 2009 at 2:23 AM
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Such a beautiful poem. It is so visual, emotional and well done.
posted by
Justi
on April 26, 2009 at 11:45 PM
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What a journey! Thanks for sharing, the imagery in this poem is astounding!
posted by
calia14
on April 26, 2009 at 11:37 PM
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Your recreation was magnificent. I could so easily envision the ivy strung cave hidden inside the deep caverns of the lushest greens - nature an ever powerful force to deal with - and I could feel the nostalgia dripping inside every line as it talked about an endearing past. It made me want to be there, right where it all happened, so I could see it in person.
posted by
NiteTide
on April 26, 2009 at 10:40 PM
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I Wonder
This poem is just fabulous.
It recreates the very steam and heat, the colors,
The majesty, the decay and the glory of the jungle. And the contrast of the young lovers praying in that ancient temple...!
Too beautiful
Raphael
posted by
Raphael222
on April 26, 2009 at 10:23 PM
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very beautiful
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on April 26, 2009 at 8:51 PM
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