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This is awesome! I liked how you turned in the poem and walked into your life poet! I also could relate to something happening, in the case of this poem, rain; but other nuances for me too! Well planned and written sweetie! I am with my Bro Bhaskar on this one too! LOVE YOU TOO!!!! sammie
xoxoxoxo
posted by
sam444
on May 1, 2009 at 6:16 AM
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Dear Marta,
OMG, my princess, this is as good as good can be. You swept me off my feet "
with that kiss in my cheek being washed out by the rain". No wonder, the ocean kissd sands that you are! Tons of xoxoxos .
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 26, 2009 at 11:04 PM
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posted by
Chilitree
on April 26, 2009 at 9:05 PM
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...I turned around and walked into my life..
Very nice poem and writing. Kathy
posted by
Maryka77
on April 26, 2009 at 6:18 PM
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I hate those things that remind me of unpleasant memories and such.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 26, 2009 at 4:51 PM
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Good concepts here! Sounds like a plan we could all use to heal!
posted by
merkie
on April 26, 2009 at 1:04 PM
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It's a difficulty when things trigger a painful memory...it makes us realize how big a part of our lives it used to be before it disappeared somehow - either through our own will or someone else's. This poem is such a good example of that...having something elemental attached to a memory seems to bring us back to the exact same moment in time - and we are lost in our own world of thought, as if years did not pass, but moments - and it's painful to remember, but a heartache we can live with. This poem reminded me of that. We are who we are for our past pains - and we are stronger people for them too. But it's nice to sometimes, without the pain, remember.
posted by
NiteTide
on April 26, 2009 at 11:30 AM
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Wonderful poem, as usual, my friend. xoxoxooxox
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on April 26, 2009 at 10:55 AM
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