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I may try and find truth before it bites me!! Hope I can in time...
posted by
mariss9
on June 12, 2009 at 9:06 PM
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beautiful
posted by
Samantha39
on June 6, 2009 at 8:35 PM
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wow, amazing!
posted by
Katherine_Ann
on May 25, 2009 at 10:16 PM
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Came by to share some love
Hey Purple, you've still got your touch girl...good to see you again and it feels great to be back...lots of love
posted by
Color_Your_Life
on May 11, 2009 at 8:14 PM
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Far out and on the edge as wisdom flow does one see the unknown, whoa
this is very deep somewhat like split person of a matter of choices.
posted by
Mystereo
on May 5, 2009 at 1:53 PM
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Vivid intristic veiw of Woman! You delve into all facets of being a woman. Good post! great to see you regainining health!
posted by
merkie
on May 3, 2009 at 11:49 AM
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Purple Mermaid11
Jeez! I should at least get your name right - Purple Mermaid11. So there
PS. Who are the 10 other mermaids?
posted by
Anonim
on May 3, 2009 at 10:37 AM
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Re: Puple_Maid
Very emotive without being sentimental, this is always a reliable indicator of good writing. Your poem reminded me of a real person I used to know, a very attractive and able woman, a wife to a no-good husband and a mother to two beautiful girls, who was in an emotional turmoil because it seemed to her, perhaps rightly perhaps not, that her ‘needs’, both physical and emotional (she was 39 at the time), were not only unrecognised by the people around her (husband, mother, etc.) but her right to have such needs were fiercely questioned. I am not attempting to draw a parallel between you and her, just simply explaining the emotive throwback your poem elicited, which is what good writing is all about – conveying and eliciting emotion. – - Anonim.
posted by
Anonim
on May 3, 2009 at 5:03 AM
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Re: I just had to return and read this spectacular poem again.
Bless you dear and look forward to seeing another soon.
posted by
Justi
on May 2, 2009 at 11:16 PM
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thank you my lovely readers....and my sir jmf, you are always generous with your comments. I humbly thank you among everyone else...bless you all as I have missed you all and your writings so much. ~mermaid~
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on May 1, 2009 at 7:58 AM
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Wow!Such a cutting edge,one way. And in another such a feeling of rapture! EXTREME ART. Am I to be touched or torn apart? So now that i have a new experience (oh,there is the other?)...now I got something to play my rattles with...Hey, you're very haunting because you push the limits of what is irreconciable in art....truthful, shattering,and amazing.
And now, if you don't mind, I'd like to start breathing again, because I'm not used to these outer limits.
John
posted by
jfm32
on April 28, 2009 at 8:50 PM
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Purple
So incredibly beautiful, sad, wise, confidence and submission. You are a great lady welcome home. We missed you.
posted by
Justi
on April 27, 2009 at 7:58 PM
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Glad to see you back again! Very sad, but beautiful poem.
posted by
elinjo
on April 27, 2009 at 5:37 AM
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I had to come back and read this one again
It's a sad piece, but very powerful.
posted by
calia14
on April 26, 2009 at 11:53 PM
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Wow!
Wow! That's really great. I'm actually a say at home mom, it's strange how your poem notes pretty much exactly how I feel at times. It's a difficult way of life, that most don't understand. I really liked your poem, I thought it was great!
posted by
NMaize
on April 26, 2009 at 10:32 PM
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Beautiful description Purple Mermaid
posted by
shobana
on April 26, 2009 at 9:05 PM
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Highly touching and profound !!
posted by
afzal50
on April 25, 2009 at 8:40 PM
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What a sad yet spirited piece. It's so good to see your writing, I miss it so much! Such depth of emotion.
posted by
calia14
on April 25, 2009 at 3:28 AM
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Re: Hey Dave....
I say I kinda miss this little adversaries with you dear...i think its all a matter of individual interpretations. As per this piece from my POV its about a woman fulfilled as wife..as a mother...yet unhappy as an individual. Has nothing to do at all about domestic duties my dear...tho I always value your POV's dear sir.....kudos!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on April 24, 2009 at 10:53 PM
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Hi Purple M.I do see some feminist sequences in here. Say what! I scrub floors, do dishes, and all that is necessary to survive. What is special when a woman does it? Its all feminism!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 24, 2009 at 10:44 PM
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