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Re: sam444
Thank you! I am glad it did... reading back I rather like this silly little ditty
posted by
lionreign
on May 1, 2009 at 2:22 PM
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It is a great to expand your thinking in poetry! KUDOS! Again the end and refrain captured me!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 29, 2009 at 12:51 PM
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Re: What a soft passionate read a gentle touch with beauty, awsome write!
thanks Mystereo! I am glad you liked it
posted by
lionreign
on April 27, 2009 at 3:58 AM
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Re: Merkie
Great - we'll have a choir in no time, but I hope you sing better than I do
posted by
lionreign
on April 27, 2009 at 3:56 AM
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Re: BrightIrish
Thank you! I wanted to share something a little more light hearted than usual
posted by
lionreign
on April 27, 2009 at 3:54 AM
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Re: Soul_Builder101
thanks SB - that is a big compliment (I love most of Mowtown's hits)
posted by
lionreign
on April 27, 2009 at 3:47 AM
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Re: Sam444
Thanks Sam - I decided to still post this one here just because I liked the sweetness of it, even if it is a silly thing
posted by
lionreign
on April 27, 2009 at 3:44 AM
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Re: NiteTide
Thanks Mindy... the wretched song was stuck in my head, but I couldn't remember all the words, so I made some up
posted by
lionreign
on April 27, 2009 at 3:40 AM
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Re: ..Douse the fear that sparks and smoulders..
Thanks Kathy, and welcome
posted by
lionreign
on April 27, 2009 at 3:39 AM
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What a soft passionate read a gentle touch with beauty, awsome write!
posted by
Mystereo
on April 26, 2009 at 6:19 AM
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hums along Lion!
posted by
merkie
on April 24, 2009 at 9:09 PM
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I really enjoyed your little ditty ..
posted by
BrightIrish
on April 24, 2009 at 3:32 PM
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Yes, it reads like one of Motown's hits!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 24, 2009 at 2:37 PM
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Well I like it! Especially tender love! The way it should be! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 24, 2009 at 2:31 PM
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It really does read like a song...I like it!
posted by
NiteTide
on April 24, 2009 at 8:45 AM
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..Douse the fear that sparks and smoulders..
Very nice to read. Kathy
posted by
Maryka77
on April 24, 2009 at 7:14 AM
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