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I agree, it is about great desire! sam/Shelly
posted by
sam444
on April 29, 2009 at 12:24 PM
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All three of these are very cool Merkie..."Fire" was my favorite.
posted by
yellowrose55
on April 28, 2009 at 7:51 PM
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2 very good ones and one GREAT one
Fire is my favourite today - it is absolutely stunning - well done!
posted by
lionreign
on April 24, 2009 at 6:44 AM
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Merkie, You never cease to amaze me with your Haiku's. Very well done, all three. I try to get by every now and then. Left arm is on the mend and I['m able to type some. Not so good as I would like, but it will convey.
posted by
michaudblaine
on April 24, 2009 at 5:49 AM
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These just keep getting better my friend
superbly written as always; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on April 24, 2009 at 3:14 AM
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Very Interesting
Thanks
posted by
Kolekshuns
on April 23, 2009 at 10:25 PM
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lovely as is everything in your post!
posted by
Kabu
on April 23, 2009 at 9:36 PM
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pretty as it can be....
posted by
Star5_
on April 23, 2009 at 8:35 PM
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You always do a great job writing. Keep on!
posted by
Texas_Gem
on April 23, 2009 at 5:45 PM
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Very interesting approach in all of them!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 23, 2009 at 2:16 PM
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I enjoyed the line that TAPS noted. "The spider's gossamer floss"...what a beautiful image..
posted by
NiteTide
on April 23, 2009 at 12:08 PM
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The spider's gossamer floss may be beautiful, but I certainly have an aversion to running into it with my face (which I've done a time or two in my lifetime).
posted by
TAPS.
on April 23, 2009 at 11:15 AM
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The three poems flow together so well. Great!
posted by
calia14
on April 23, 2009 at 11:03 AM
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I like this. Good work!
kathy
posted by
Maryka77
on April 23, 2009 at 10:51 AM
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