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Poetry at its best deep passionate convincing springly creative and love.

posted by Mystereo on April 21, 2009 at 7:26 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks my dear friends! I so appreciate all your comments!

posted by merkie on April 21, 2009 at 8:44 AM | link to this | reply

That was unexpected. I anticipated a first love situation,

and found instead it was a poignant appeal to sieze the day before we lose each other. Nicely done.

posted by Pat_B on April 21, 2009 at 5:17 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely Margaret! I bow to your poetical wizardry!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on April 21, 2009 at 12:14 AM | link to this | reply

yes, lets take a deep breath and holding hands walk along the beach

together healing our souls in peaceful companionship.

posted by Kabu on April 20, 2009 at 10:14 PM | link to this | reply

Margaret... this is so sad... so beautifully sad. Reading you I just realized that the thought of leaving one's love is even harsher than the one to be left by him... sometimes I am afraid of what would happen if my time came first, for one never knows... and I almost hope and pray he passes first... so that I am sure he is taken care of and he will have my hand to hold... on the other hand... I know I would love to hold his as my soul departs...I am so selfish... Poems that touch one's core are the ones that live forever... This one is one of those .

posted by Sinome on April 20, 2009 at 8:24 PM | link to this | reply

Great Poem.....

...as usual. Thanks for sharing.

posted by Kolekshuns on April 20, 2009 at 7:17 PM | link to this | reply

very interesting