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This is so profound and level, what a way with words and full of deepness!
posted by
Mystereo
on April 27, 2009 at 3:15 PM
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Love this poem -such thoughfulness!
posted by
merkie
on April 27, 2009 at 8:45 AM
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Re: hello from Ferretlover
Okay, thanks!
posted by
calia14
on April 21, 2009 at 11:37 PM
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I really liked the contrast and the to end with poignant questioning was very strategic! KUDOS!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 21, 2009 at 3:49 AM
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hello from Ferretlover
Hi Cali....this is a copywrited piece, so do credit my writing.
Thank you,
Jannet Gregory
aka: Ferretlover and Ukie
PS. SO tell me your friends' responces.
Thanks
posted by
QuailNest
on April 20, 2009 at 7:03 PM
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Do you...?
I really like this poem, this contemplation.. Thanks for writing it. MK
posted by
Maryka77
on April 20, 2009 at 6:17 PM
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I can feel the emotion of the speaker.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 20, 2009 at 3:46 PM
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Excellent!
posted by
BrightIrish
on April 20, 2009 at 8:07 AM
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Loved it, very well written...
posted by
Kayzzaman
on April 20, 2009 at 1:05 AM
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Re: sinome
I appreciate you!
posted by
calia14
on April 19, 2009 at 10:59 PM
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Re: yellowrose
Thanks for the comment and the flowers :)
posted by
calia14
on April 19, 2009 at 10:59 PM
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Re: calia
Thanks, that makes me smile
posted by
calia14
on April 19, 2009 at 10:58 PM
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calia
"Caressing the soft parts Of your deepest misgivings Transforming the ambience Coaxing forth a smile. Do you hate me for it?" No, know that you'll be loved for that
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posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 19, 2009 at 10:28 PM
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So Powerful..emotion with thunder throughout, asking.
And I love the title too.
posted by
yellowrose55
on April 19, 2009 at 10:20 PM
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Beautifully done Callia... Superb!!!!
posted by
Sinome
on April 19, 2009 at 9:47 PM
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