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Beautifully written...

posted by Kayzzaman on April 20, 2009 at 4:33 AM | link to this | reply

Nice!
Thanks for sharing.

posted by Kolekshuns on April 19, 2009 at 9:40 PM | link to this | reply

Ah the saga continues. Interesting verse with vivacious imagery!

posted by merkie on April 19, 2009 at 8:08 PM | link to this | reply

continuation, butterfly ball..
A wonderful evocation of nature.  I love the way you emphasise the first line of each stanza.

posted by 2Philomena on April 19, 2009 at 3:58 PM | link to this | reply

Stunning verses.  I love your unique style... Great work!

posted by Sinome on April 19, 2009 at 3:17 PM | link to this | reply