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I commend you on this read for the fact that it was just moving and real. I was that kid that runaway made my way back home yet, I never had to put myself in that position. Bless then without knowledge bless now with it. Great read!!

posted by Mystereo on December 7, 2010 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

Very Nice.....
Take a bow.  Bow DownClapping Hands

posted by Kolekshuns on April 19, 2009 at 12:30 PM | link to this | reply

A wonderful poem indeed! sam

posted by sam444 on April 19, 2009 at 6:19 AM | link to this | reply

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This is fantastic! Loved every singly word, and the underlying teaching.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on April 18, 2009 at 10:04 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful!
Wow, what a beautiful poem.  Compassionate and reflective of God's loving nature.

posted by janey_ on April 18, 2009 at 10:02 PM | link to this | reply

This is a perfect poem. You write with such compassion and empathy! Just beautiful!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on April 18, 2009 at 12:37 AM | link to this | reply

The light of hope is what we need in times of distress. Excellent.

posted by hardilaziz on April 17, 2009 at 8:03 PM | link to this | reply