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'Sometimes' is a terrific effort, my friend!
posted by
hardilaziz
on April 18, 2009 at 7:32 AM
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Merkie
I enjoyed “Sometimes” probably because I am all to often in awe of the sky. It's a powerful thing....
posted by
Troosha
on April 18, 2009 at 7:29 AM
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This is good perceiving!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 18, 2009 at 12:57 AM
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Very, very,
Nice! 
posted by
Kolekshuns
on April 18, 2009 at 12:26 AM
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I heard Dream sicles and had to come back...yum!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 18, 2009 at 12:14 AM
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"Orange Soda sky" - I like that. It's kind of like dreamsicles which are so yummy.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 17, 2009 at 11:44 PM
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Such wonderful poems!! I love the line "Orange soda sky".
posted by
calia14
on April 17, 2009 at 6:56 PM
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What? Sometimes? Imagery like that it should happen all the time! sam/Shelly
posted by
sam444
on April 17, 2009 at 5:08 PM
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Lovely words merkle
posted by
Ray_O_Sunshine
on April 17, 2009 at 12:52 PM
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What lovely pictures you've painted! Love your verses. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on April 17, 2009 at 10:33 AM
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Very cool stuff, merkie!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 17, 2009 at 10:21 AM
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Nice, very nice...
posted by
Kayzzaman
on April 17, 2009 at 10:16 AM
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