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The changing tides and newness everywhere are so filling. Merkie your poems convey beautifully the changes coming from every direction during this time...wonderful.
posted by
yellowrose55
on April 11, 2009 at 4:53 PM
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Thanks everyone! Happy Easter ,may the bleesings of this time abound for each of you!
posted by
merkie
on April 10, 2009 at 10:46 AM
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Both very good
I enjoyed them immensely - great images and lines abound
posted by
lionreign
on April 10, 2009 at 8:24 AM
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guess we are all in the spring mood
posted by
Lanetay
on April 10, 2009 at 8:14 AM
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Merkie
For whatever reason this really stuck with me: time now floats in curves. Great line and both poems another example of your insight and gift with words.
posted by
Troosha
on April 10, 2009 at 7:41 AM
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Amazing my friend!
beautiful pieces Margaret; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on April 10, 2009 at 6:22 AM
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Booooooooo........that's awesome.
posted by
Star5_
on April 10, 2009 at 3:39 AM
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Got to open my windows...I am breathing last year's air! lol
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on April 9, 2009 at 11:35 PM
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You do a wonderful work with words every time I read it. I enjjoy it. It is deep and has much more depth than some others I have read. You are not a shallow person. And I like that. You are an honor to the poetry section.
posted by
michaudblaine
on April 9, 2009 at 10:56 PM
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This is so lovely, merkie
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on April 9, 2009 at 9:55 PM
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No words...but this...
posted by
Chilitree
on April 9, 2009 at 9:11 PM
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Great imagery! I loved the Fibonacci as you might have guessed! sam/Shelly
posted by
sam444
on April 9, 2009 at 4:20 PM
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I love the line
"
The Northern Lights seem to rain beyond heaven tonight" I saw the Northern Lights when I was a little boy and have never forgotten it
posted by
malcolm
on April 9, 2009 at 10:13 AM
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Peace (Fibonacci) /// Hidden (attempting triolet)
Packed with exuberance
posted by
2Philomena
on April 9, 2009 at 10:12 AM
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Re: Very lovely, both. xoox
Thank you Hazel!
posted by
merkie
on April 9, 2009 at 9:32 AM
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Very lovely, both. xoox
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on April 9, 2009 at 9:02 AM
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