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                happiness breeds inspiration in your life thats what we all need
                
                    posted by
                    spiderfly
                     on April 10, 2009 at 4:00 AM
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                    posted by
                    Star5_
                     on April 3, 2009 at 6:34 PM
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                Wonderful rhythm and visuals - well done!  
                
                    posted by
                    Marineair
                     on April 3, 2009 at 3:42 AM
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                The last two lines rap it up so beautifully. A wise and wonderful poem.

  
                
                    posted by
                    yellowrose55
                     on April 2, 2009 at 12:41 PM
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                Excellent!  
                
                    posted by
                    Kayzzaman
                     on April 2, 2009 at 1:49 AM
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